Corections :
I don't have any pets or I don't have a pet
One day I Intend to have one
Regards Barry (English is my native language)
--- En Espanol-Ingles@g..., "Carla Tradutora" <carla.tradutora@t...>
escribió:
> Today, I don't have any pet. I had lots of fishes and birds when I
was a
> child.
> My mother has two birds: a canary and a paroquet. She loves them
very much.
> She treats them as sons. She talks with them and the canary
answers ... it's
> too funny.
> I love dogs. One day I intent to have one.
> I think I don't have anything else to say about pets.
> Carla/Brazil
Today, I don't have any pet. I had lots of fishes and birds when I was a child. My mother has two birds: a canary and a paroquet. She loves them very much. She...
Corections : I don't have any pets or I don't have a pet One day I Intend to have one Regards Barry (English is my native language) ... was a ... very much. ...
Suggestion: Wouldn't children be more appropriate than sons in the 5th sentence? If our native language is English, can we start writing our stories in...
... very much. ... Hi Carla! You have a high level of skill with English! My corrections: paroquet---parakeet If the birds are male, you could refer to them as...
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